A spray of pine needles found umbrage on the breeze. They'd left the mother tree with no quiescence. A swing of blankness ripping wild off the bark. Gone in flapping panic. Quietly hidden.
I liked this - I could nearly smell the pine scent.
This fits together so well! I'm in love with it! (:
nicely done, You. :)
Great job with these words!
A spray of Pune needles drew me in. Great entry.
I, too, liked the "spray of pine needles" phrase. Very evocative and easy to visualize.
Lovely use of the prompt! Very original and vibrant imagery. Great job!
Love the spray of pine needles. Can almost smell them!
I liked this - I could nearly smell the pine scent.
ReplyDeleteThis fits together so well! I'm in love with it! (:
ReplyDeletenicely done, You. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job with these words!
ReplyDeleteA spray of Pune needles drew me in. Great entry.
ReplyDeleteI, too, liked the "spray of pine needles" phrase. Very evocative and easy to visualize.
ReplyDeleteLovely use of the prompt! Very original and vibrant imagery. Great job!
ReplyDeleteLove the spray of pine needles. Can almost smell them!
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